More tweaks.
diff --git a/proposals/LP0000-Template.md b/proposals/LP0000-Template.md
index ad7fc5d..9a56695 100644
--- a/proposals/LP0000-Template.md
+++ b/proposals/LP0000-Template.md
@@ -1,14 +1,15 @@
# Proposal Name
-* Proposal: LP-0123
+* Proposal: [LP-0123](link to the file on github when it lands)
* Author(s): Author 1, Author 2, ...
* Review Managers: TBD1, TBD2[, TBD3, TBD4]
* Status: [WIP, Active review (date...date), Accepted, Rejected, Returned for revision, etc.]
_During the review process, add the following fields as needed:_
+* Pitch Thread: [1](url for discussion) [2](url for discussion)
* Decision Notes: Rationale, Additional Commentary
-* Previous Revision: [1](https://github.com/apple/swift-evolution/blob/...commit-ID.../proposals/NNNN-filename.md)
+* Previous Revision: [1](url for previous significant revision)
* Previous Proposal: LP-0012
diff --git a/proposals/LP0001-LLVMDecisionMaking.md b/proposals/LP0001-LLVMDecisionMaking.md
index ca7e6b5..6f8cf9d 100644
--- a/proposals/LP0001-LLVMDecisionMaking.md
+++ b/proposals/LP0001-LLVMDecisionMaking.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-## Improvements to LLVM Decision Making
+## Introduce a new LLVM process to resolve contentious decisions
-* Proposal: LP-0001
-* Author: Chris Lattner
-* Review Managers: TBD1, TBD2
-* Status: WIP
-
+* Proposal: [LP-0001](https://github.com/llvm/llvm-www/blob/master/proposals/LP0001-LLVMDecisionMaking.md)
+* Author: [Chris Lattner](https://github.com/lattner)
+* Review Manager: [Chris Lattner](https://github.com/lattner)
+* Status: [Active Discussion](http://lists.llvm.org/pipermail/llvm-dev/2020-June/142017.html) through June 12, 2020
+* Pitch threads: [[1](http://lists.llvm.org/pipermail/llvm-dev/2020-January/138267.html)] [[2](http://lists.llvm.org/pipermail/llvm-dev/2020-May/141810.html)]
## Introduction
@@ -75,18 +75,19 @@
Hello LLVM community,
The review of "((PROPOSAL NAME))" begins now and runs through
- ((REVIEW END DATE)). The proposal is [available online](URL of proposal on github):
+ ((REVIEW END DATE)). The proposal is [available online](URL of proposal on
+ github).
- Reviews are an important part of the LLVM Proposal process. All review feedback
- should be either on this forum thread or, if you would like to keep your feedback
- private, directly to one of the review managers.
+ Feedback is an important part of the LLVM Proposal process. All review
+ feedback should be either on this forum thread or, if you would like to
+ keep your feedback private, directly to one of the review managers.
**What goes into a review?**
- The goal of the review process is to improve the proposal under review through
- constructive criticism and, eventually, determine the direction of LLVM. When
- writing your response, here are some questions you might want to answer in your
- review:
+ The goal of the review process is to improve the proposal under review
+ through constructive criticism and, eventually, determine the direction of
+ LLVM. When writing your response, here are some questions you might want
+ to answer in your review:
* What is your evaluation of the proposal? What positive or negative
implications would accepting this have?
